Soldier boy jack

this is sadly what is happening to the beutiful tigers and i just wanted to write it down to see what people think its sad and unkind but its really ...

A: Andy shh he is asleep S: Silently he walked out of the room L: lets think about what he might be dreaming about E:Emerdales on t.v though E:Emerdale? Emerdale? ...

sleeping, napping, dozing off, if you want the best seat in the house... you will have to move the cat.

the tiger hunts in dence grass, waiting to pounce, a small antellope is her prey, she pounces on the antellope, the antellope is dead, she drags her prey back to ...

well i like it, no sorry i love it, i love to read and story with animals as the characters its a bit of a change from everyday life for ...

well i have read about half your story now, i think its got a good story line i'll make sure i read the rest when i'm not in a lesson ...

hmm not much more to say really. keep up the good work though

i agree with the other commenters, but i think that you really need to write more on this story. But aways remember never let anyone put you down on your ...

thanks for the help on grammar

okay can anyone write anymore than the last two peeps but they said it all good storyline

yeah i agree with green_river i loved this

what more can i say i dreamed it i made it into a script then you came and made it a whole lot better thanks so much i owe alot ...

yeah i would read it if you put the story on in smaller parts its just with a big thing like that not many people bother to read it

yeah same here

thanks i'll keep that it in mind